Response 16, Week 8

The pattern I got was 9 8 9 8 8 8 9 8 9 8 9 8 9 8 8 8 8 9 9 10 8 ... but maybe I read it wrong because I only went through once counting because keeping up is hard for me lol. This is definitely a cool outdoors man perspective. I like the way you wrote to compare nature to things in a home like carpet and a quilt and made nature the narrators home. But if I read the pattern right that means you need to go back and check to fix that? so that is my improvement advice! Really cool piece and sounds like a fun exercise I might need to try.