Response 4, Week 2

Response to Diamonds Calisthenic Week 2.

I found this to be written quite cleverly. It's an interesting combination of bugs and religion. This defiantly could be analyzed deeply when seeking meaning and interpretation.

The opening line its self is just brilliant. I mean it describes the personality of a gnat in four words. A bug that is so annoying and nagging and bothersome as it seeks what it desires. "Incessant search for substance" And then the lines seem to alternate between a bug and religious background talk, all while still describing the bug, in the first stanza.

I love how you provided a lot of visualization in your words. I don't really know what advice to give because as a reader I feel satisfied by what I just read