Thursday, September 13, 2012

4210 Improv 7

I heard a Fly buzz (465)

 
by Emily Dickinson

I heard a Fly buzz – when I died –  
The Stillness in the Room
Was like the Stillness in the Air –  
Between the Heaves of Storm – 

The Eyes around – had wrung them dry –  
And Breaths were gathering firm
For that last Onset – when the King
Be witnessed – in the Room –  

I willed my Keepsakes – Signed away
What portions of me be
Assignable – and then it was
There interposed a Fly –  

With Blue – uncertain stumbling Buzz –  
Between the light – and me –  
And then the Windows failed – and then
I could not see to see – 




My Improv:

I heard a Fly buzz- when I died-
The Stillness in the Room
I felt the air freeze- in my throat-
and lung a penny tomb.

The retina fail- and then the rest
a casket soon consume
the news is truth- a child
having not yet touch- the gas stove.

The beans are tall-but not enough-
to rise up out the soot
so the baby learns nothingness
while flagged- sat by the tomb.

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