Response 19, Week 10

Kyley,I love this. I love your approach to the subject. I like how you kept yellow as your main subject and I like how you described this piece with art terminology. I also like how the narrorator seems to share a relationship with this piece. I love this line "How cobwebs clutter every joint of my body." Its got this eerie feel and its such an intresting image. One part I get a little lost at is towards the end afer "Even my wife cries every night..." when it gets to "I told my son" Whose voice is this? The wife or the narrator of the piece? But other than that I really enjoy this piece.