For Diamond's Calisthenic.
I just got done writing my Calisthenic! Its so cool to see how differently we tore this poem apart and reconstructed it. I agree with Tim. It was a little weird for me to read this piece because all of a sudden towards the end there was a change in the narrative voice. But I really like the beginning. I also like the repetition of words in the beginning, it gave a little more emphasis to the text. I also liked "the drunk shriveled up in church on Sunday" line because that is youth church going truth lol. Anyway this is really cool! You should check out mine and tell me what you think because we made such different poems! Its neat.
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