Response 11, Week 6

I really liked the transitions that took place through out this piece. To me it felt like the narrator was sitting and pondering life and it kind of cracked me up. I mean you started from drinks to diets to poverty to sexuality to religion to Thanksgiving? haha It was just so strangely delightful. I'm kind of wondering what the underlying message of the piece is? Or what created this voice and what is the picture behind the ramblings. To be honest I love to read ramblings as long as the language is interesting but you know how Davidson pushes for more and more meaning which truly makes our pieces better. What do you think could be added to create that extra element? Maybe this could be an angry piece?