Thursday, September 8, 2011

“Improv” -ing/imitation, Week 2

This is my attempt to further butcher and play around with the words from last week's exercise.

I want twilight woods

to wear until my skin is clean

and tears away hoisting the dirty dead

with their hands.

I want to walk past McDonalds,

past the old Exon selling day-old pies

in their café, past the Matthews sisters

slinging aged beef.

And unfortunately I don't have time tonight to play around with this more before the deadline but I will work on it tomorrow... just had to have something to show.


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