Response 2, Week 1

For: Tequilla

Jami,

I wrote a comment to this and when I went to re-copy it for my post it was gone :/ So here is try two.

This is such a cool way to describe tequilla.I think my favorite line is "prior with rancid seasons."

I like your choice for line breaks because to me it is esthetically pleasing.

I would love to see an extention of this poem describing more of the effects of tequilla because it can be an angry, lustful, or sinful substance.

I find the ending really intresting because it could have multiple meanings. A substance bubbling in the stomach waiting to explode could mean vomit (eww) or the characteristic of the substance its self or even the emotion of the drinker (ie his/her anger).

I think you did a great job with the time constraints of class.