I enjoyed this J-Quote. It was very simple in a sense but for some odd reason, it brings a smile. To write a poem about a worm's state of condition and has an underlying meaning of feeling bad that day in such a simple poem, to me, is quite entertaining. I am still trying to get a grip on the long well-imaged words of contemporary poetry and some of it goes on and on that a short read is quite refreshing. However, if you would like to elaborate on what a 'salty worm on the pavement' is like then I believe it has the makings of a very entertaining piece. You could play on the thought of a "small" and "insignificant" worm's perspective about the robin who comes to prey on him and allow the worm to ramble on and take a pessimistic, judgmental, closed minded tone. Maybe you can take the 'voice' of the worm and add more into it when you are having a bad day.
I enjoyed this J-Quote. It was very simple in a sense but for some odd reason, it brings a smile. To write a poem about a worm's state of condition and has an underlying meaning of feeling bad that day in such a simple poem, to me, is quite entertaining. I am still trying to get a grip on the long well-imaged words of contemporary poetry and some of it goes on and on that a short read is quite refreshing.
ReplyDeleteHowever, if you would like to elaborate on what a 'salty worm on the pavement' is like then I believe it has the makings of a very entertaining piece. You could play on the thought of a "small" and "insignificant" worm's perspective about the robin who comes to prey on him and allow the worm to ramble on and take a pessimistic, judgmental, closed minded tone. Maybe you can take the 'voice' of the worm and add more into it when you are having a bad day.